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Hasse's avatar

Glad the youthful wisdom made a resurgence. I've had similar thoughts recently.

I think there's great 'economy' in this poem, if that makes sense. A whole life's arc is basically expressed in a few stanzas. Beautiful and effective.

erniet's avatar

Thank you! I actually strive for brevity; I like “economy!”

Allegra's avatar

I love this - and resonate so much! Beautifully written!

erniet's avatar

Thank you! Glad you liked it!