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James Hart's avatar

Beautiful, Ernie. (And the pun here is definitely appropriate. :)

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erniet's avatar

Thanks! I actually liked the outcome, even though it was a sort of "found" poem among my cast offs.

Though it's gotten surprisingly little love from my readers...it's funny how the poems I think are good are almost always the poems that almost no one likes...😂

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James Hart's avatar

Absolutely the same on my end. 😄

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Carole Roseland's avatar

Nice, Ernie, both in form and substance. I hope you still have a little dance and wine in you!😊

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erniet's avatar

No more wine (I abused that privelege😂) but maybe some dance moves...😂

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Kathleen Hobbs's avatar

I miss those days also. My sister and I would go to clubs in Philadelphia during the 70s and dance until total wonderful exhaustion set in.

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erniet's avatar

Cool! Sounds like wild times!

It's funny how we don't appreciate things until they're gone...

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Kathleen Hobbs's avatar

It definitely was. And yes, you're right. We didn't appreciate them. But sure. Do love the memories.

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Rob Riley's avatar

that's yours?...b-e-a-u-tiful man, excellent!

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erniet's avatar

Thanks!

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Crapp's avatar

They are wonderful in the heart of them right… shame about the rest of life around them as we get on.

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erniet's avatar

Like so many things you don't appreciate them until they're gone...

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Hasse's avatar

I could almost hear the music.

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erniet's avatar

Thanks!

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