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Frederick Fullerton's avatar

Love the poem, Ernie. For what it's worth, the lizards must have thought they were shouting at dogs, horses, or soldiers because the German Frederick the Great reportedly said "Speak French to intellectuals, Italian to women, and German to dogs, horses, and soldiers."

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erniet's avatar

😂 Maybe I read that quote somewhere and my subconscious dredged it up!

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James Hart's avatar

Wonderful, ernie. Between the subject matter and the form, it reminded me quite a bit of Edward Arlington Robinson.

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erniet's avatar

Ah, Robinson wrote Richard Corey and Miniver Cheevey! Of course I know him! Thanks, that was high praise!

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James Hart's avatar

Yeah, he’s a ton of fun. Yours had a bit of a “Valley of the Shadow” kinda momentum to it.

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erniet's avatar

It's funny I thought it rang out more like Stephen Crane's "The Black Riders and other lines" but I think you're right, it's more like Robinson.

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erniet's avatar

Thanks! I’m not familiar with Robinson; I’ll check him out!

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Ken's avatar

Strange. Beautiful

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erniet's avatar

Thanks, Ken. Yes, it was haunting which is why when I woke up I wrote it down.

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