These purple words lie dead upon the page, Slain the very instant of their birth. Their value lesser than my daily wage-- No timeless insights make their reading worth The effort that it took me to compose These clever lines with neither depth nor grace. Yet someone, somewhere, sitting in repose Might, in reading, have their heartbeat race. For beauty lies within each reader's soul, And I, my harshest critic, know not what Will make melodic resonances toll, Or unfurl notions long considered shut. The reader has the final judgement; they Give life again to every word I slay. 7/23/2025
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Love it.
Sonnets are a favorite form of mine.
TBH, that was one of your best...it has a classic style, I've mentioned Robert Browning to you before, I think...and it has that same feeling, that mastery of language and ideas. Really nice Ernie.