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Jenn's avatar

Love it.

Sonnets are a favorite form of mine.

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erniet's avatar

I tend to use the form a lot…I can probably publish a whole book of just my “sonnets of a sort.” 😂

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Jenn's avatar

Something is amiss with Substack; I posted a whole comment below this that is not here today. :-/

Anyway, what I was trying to tell you is that when I was a nanny right out of college, I developed a personal practice of writing a sonnet a day during the baby's afternoon naps. Your post made me wonder if I have the bandwidth (and time) to try doing something like that again.

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erniet's avatar

Cool! Did you keep any? You could post them on your substack!

I’m not an everyday writer, despite being retired…my writing comes in waves (though I spend far more time editing and revising than in composing).

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Jenn's avatar

I have them all in a journal type book. They are almost all about family members, so I’m not sure how worth sharing publicly they are, but I’ll take a look… 😄

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Rob Riley's avatar

TBH, that was one of your best...it has a classic style, I've mentioned Robert Browning to you before, I think...and it has that same feeling, that mastery of language and ideas. Really nice Ernie.

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erniet's avatar

Wow, thanks, Rob!

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Rob Riley's avatar

thank you Ernie!

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Carole Roseland's avatar

Methinks you did your thinking on this poem,

A sonnet can be difficult to rhyme

That writing can be hard, you’re not alone

Each word you eke out takes a lot of time!

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erniet's avatar

Nice!😁

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Iris Shaw's avatar

Love this!

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erniet's avatar

Thank you!

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Mark Rico's avatar

... and ironically or not, this is one of your best. Wonderfully composed sonnet, Ernie.

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erniet's avatar

Thanks, Mark! I appreciate that!

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